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Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Screenplay Comments II

My brother Chris, singer-songwriter extraordinare and chef you want to know, writes:

"Love it
1st best line "you want to go back to the
liquor store and I'll shoot him again for
2nd best line page 102 about c4 explosives
“Yeah it's when people are sitting still and
suddenly start moving at 27,000 miles per
hour.” That made me howl thanks
a line i thought could be better is the
bartender saying "there must be a better
way" to Clive. great to read
and of course so many more great lines
do not stop writing this stuff
i know easier said than done."

Chris' CD Orbit will premier on iTunes soon, check it, you won't be disappointed.

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